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It seemed that the world retribution just came down,judging the humanities. people were engulfed with the fear and hopelessness. the only thing they could do was to hide from the demon god in order for them to be alive. Argh, i am so bored. I have not seen any worthy opponents. Hmmm, i think i need to go for a wash.' he said as the sickening smell of the blood of his victims came to his senses. Then the demon god flew toward the nearest river in the area. As soon as he reached the river, he dove into the water. He let his body float, enjoying the coolness of the water as he closed his eyes. A minutes later, he sensed someone else's presence. He furrowed his brows. Who dare to disrupt me, the demon god, from my peaceful and relaxing moment but to his rurprice the momend his eyes open, he saw the most beautiful creatures he had ever seen in his entire life. CHECK THE NEXT CHAPTER TO KNOW IS THE BEAUTIFUL CREATURE. AND HOW SHE IS BEAUTIFUL. DONT FORGET TO COMMEN. |
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@talentedt | 2 days |
The chapters are too short
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@talentedt | 2 days |
The story is nice, though
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@talentedt | 2 days |
Nice writeup
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@talentedt | 2 days |
Keep up the good work
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@talentedt | 2 days |
But there's still room for improvement
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@talentedt | 2 days |
I hope it's a very interesting story
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@yzzbichee | 18 hours |
Try better bt its nice
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@bailey | 18 hours |
It's too short buh it's interesting,keep it up
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