Guys, tell me what you think about this story, is it worth writing???
Is it worth the time???
I haven't even edited it by the way..


Chapter One

His atmosphere was filled with a strange puzzling air that made his head swirl.
Hey! came a voice.
What are you looking at! A croaked voice added,
That's mine! Chloe raged,
Oh, you mean this the first voice said again, holding up a finely crafted wrist watch that was sparkled with a streak of a rare blue light and sculptured with a tiny arc of glass magnifier - the kind you would find on the hand of a scientist with passion for his career.
Give it back! Chloe demanded, unwavering.
Whoa! The kid's even got some nerve.
A maniac laughter rose up on the air vacuum between the enemies.
Chloe smirked - they think they have it all.
The laughter continued again when they saw the look on her face. Their effect burgeoned further and further with passion, but that passion was ended by the next action triggered by Chloe: she swift past both enemies, delivering a pack of punches to their face each; then swiped the wrist watch and in a twinkling, she was out through the window, leaving a finely rimed homemade bomb with them - IDs, she called it instead of IEDs.
The toy-like bomb exploded with a loud - BOOM!
Smoke issued out through the windows as particles of flame and dust flew in great haste through them.
Chloe barely scratched her nose from the reaction, she was used to that sound all along - ever since she could walk, after all, it was an explosion that killed her parents, destroyed her home and rendered her homeless.
The smoke died as quickly as it had risen; the chilly sensation from my IDs feels good to the world, she thought.
They hadn't known I had that up my sleeve because I had played along. But little did they know that. she thought aloud. She had been making explosives for criminals, thieves and son fancy drifters who had the money - but loved staying on the streets; even a fee villains too. They were all a shrill but perfect combination for her market target.

    To be continued....